英语四级高分作文分析

英语四级高分作文分析

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about a course that has impressed you most in college. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but more than 180 words.

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　　The Most Impressing Course in My College Life

　　When it comes to a course that leaves the deepest impression in university, different people stand on different grounds. As for me, the most impressive course in college is Appreciation of English Movies. I prefer this curriculum to others owing to the following factors.

　　On one hand, the professor in charge of this course has impressed me most because she is not only knowledgeable but also patient. More importantly, it is this respectable teacher who spurs my interest to English harder and broadens my horizon as well. Until now, what she said in class often occurs to my mind. On the other hand, there are many discussions in class. We are allowed to talk freely about a movie, the topic ranging from the theme of a film to its casting. So, during the talk, we become increasingly open-minded. And undoubtedly a brain open to everything carries great importance to study, work and life.

　　Generally speaking, the course on appreciating English films has impressed me most for it is not only instructive but also entertaining. And therefore, I suggest that more similar courses should be offered in the university.

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　　写作点评：

　　这篇四级写作真题属于描述性的题目，较以往更加趋向于灵活性，重点考察的是考生的英语基础知识。而且话题上也偏向于大学生的校园学习和生活话题，文体形式比较自由。因此考生应该把重点放在提升语言质量上，灵活运用基础词汇及固定表达写出语言流畅的文章。虽然图画作文是近年大学英语四级写作中出现频率较高的一类文体，但是考生在备考的同时也要面面俱到，要兼顾到描述类等其他文体的写作。总之，写作是一个长期积累的过程，我们要掌握各种类型文章的写法及写作要点，这样才能以不变应万变。