BEC中级写作范文Part 2
You work as the Marketing Director at a heavy truck manufacturing company. Your need more staff in your department and your line manager has asked you to write a report explaining why.
Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.
Then, using all the handwritten notes, write the report.
Write 120 – 140 words.
Suggested Answer
Introduction
This report aims to explain why our department needs extra staff.
Findings
The current situation is that our sales dropped from 200,000 units to 150, 000 units in the past 3 years. To improve the situation, the company is exploring potential markets in Africa and Latin America. The annual holiday is lengthened and we frequently hear complaints about our after-sales service.
Conclusion
More staff is needed in the marketing department due to the rising demand from the marketing campaign, the increased holiday days and the efforts to improve the after-sales service. Only by recruiting more staff can the department successfully carry out the tasks of boosting the sales and opening the new markets. Also sufficient staff is needed to handle customer complaints so as to improve the after-sales service.