雅思高分作文间隔年的利弊

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教育主题高分范文GAP YEAR  

Written by Jasmine

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

分析问题，掌握关键词。思考间隔年的利弊，可能出现的好处有积累工作经验、增加对社会的认知、开拓眼界、丰富阅历、锻炼独立性等；可能出现的弊处有学生沉迷旅行不愿回归校园、耽误学业、容易被欺骗等。那么如何下笔呢？

范文-intro. P（导入）

Now the word 'gap year' seem to be on every young person's lips. Although it is considered as a norm in some European countries, such as Britain and Sweden, with considerable benefits for further university study and upcoming job hunting, the drawbacks also exist.

范文-Supporting. P1

The worrisome point of taking a year traveling or working is that an individual may be a year behind his or her peer. It takes you away from the classroom experience, and put you a year behind your friends, so you might be a bit rusty when you return. Also, there are financial considerations. Not all the families can give the support, it’s hard for a high school student to raise money by himself. A year off is quite money consuming, which make it unrealistic for part of the students. To be budget wisely, they give up a gap year, since they don’t want to end up with credit card debt.

范文-Supporting. P2

The bonus of working or traveling for a year before college is the improved college chance. Many prestigious colleges and universities encourage applicants to pursue a gap year option after graduating from high school. If the admission officer need to decide between two applications with the same IELTS score or GPAs, the one who volunteered in Africa, willing to take effort to change the current situation there, and occasionally speak some Swahili is much more competitive. The university professor also think that student with gap year experience has more specific academic goals.

范文-Supporting. P3

What’s more, gap year sparkles a graduate’s resume. Oftentimes, a gap year involves staying in one spot and soaking up its culture, part of which means getting a job. During the year, you’ll be forced to integrate into a new society, a new group of friends, and maybe even new languages or cultural norms, thus your adaptation skill, interpersonal communication skill, language skill as well as problem solving skills are all enhanced. These are exactly a top enterprise’s  human resources manager are chasing after.

范文-conclusion. P（结论）

To conclude, there are both advantages and disadvantages of taking a gap year, whereas for long term benefits in education and career arena, young people should take it into consideration. Regardless, taking a gap year means that you’re living life to the fullest.

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